So at this point the kind of work I'm doing is geared towards a final draft, so in the interest of finishing up blog posts "on-time" I have a link to the complete audio that will go with my video essay.
Author Response
- So I'm aware that this is really really long. I'm not sure where exactly but I'm going to have to cut down some details somewhere. I also know that I haven't titled it, I'm waiting until it's complete to name it.
- Weaknesses:
- So I think the major weakness, and my biggest concern at this point, is the length. I haven't even included all the clips I'm going to have, so I need to cut down a lot. I also am starting to doubt the relevance of my first section on child psychology, I'm not sure if it veers from my argument too much.
- Strengths:
- I think my argument is really really strong. I make good, logical points throughout and I think it flows well. It makes a good impact and I think I've created the image of the MPAA that I wanted to convey.
I'm almost done putting images and transitions to this audio, so a real fine cut is coming very soon!
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