Some notes for the readers:
- I cannot for the life of me figure out how to attach captions to my pictures, so I haven't cited any of them. This should not be as big of an issue as it is, but if someone could tell me how that'd be great.
- I am really feeling like I haven't added enough information on everything, but I also feel like it's becoming way too long. Any suggestion on what I should cut/expand on?
- How do I know how much to cite? I've learned so much on the topic, a lot of what I'm writing is based off memory. I'm afraid that I haven't cited enough of my information.
Kurman Communications. "Buttermilk Pancakes." 5/5/2014 via Flickr. Creative Commons License. |
It's late and I want celebratory pancakes.
You're going to have to scroll down quite a bit to see my comments on the rubric, but great job!
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It says I don't have access to see the document, so you might have to change the settings to public. But thank you for reviewing mine!
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ReplyDeleteGreat job at identifying and explaining the controversy! Your paper does tend to make persuasive arguments, however. That will not be needed until we pick a side on our respective controversy.
-Joshua Smith
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